Desmond Proper, Esq. - Revision history

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 === CFO of the Primm and Proper Hospitality Group LLC ===
-'''Questor of Clan Ventrue'''
+'''Aedile of Clan Ventrue'''
 === About ===

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 === Public Timeline ===
-*Was a laywer throughout most the 1800s in the south, worked largely for the railroads.
+*Was a lawyer throughout most the 1800s in the south, worked largely for the railroads.
 *Was a carpetbagger in the late 1800s after the Civil War.
 *Met his financial partner, Arthur Primm, during the Reconstruction.

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 *The Hospitality Group has been to war with the Family Man over territory in the past, although there has been an uneasy truce since the Family Man has gone to ground.
 *That he is in charge of the Hospitality Group, and that Arthur is just a figurehead.
 *Feel free to add more here!

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 |clan=Clan Ventrue
 |sect=The Camarilla
-|city=Pittsburgh PA
+|city=Pittsburgh, PA
 |player=[[User:Pete|Peter Fitzpatrick]]
 }}

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 |image=Proper.jpg
 | pronouns= He/Him
-|clan=Ventrue
+|clan=Clan Ventrue
 |sect=The Camarilla
 |city=Pittsburgh PA

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 === About ===
 *Silent partner and partial owner of Primm & Proper Hospitality Group LLC. The Primm & Proper Hospitality Group is known throughout the east coast and is invested in a chain of hotels and convention centers in the region. He also maintains a law practice that usually acts for a sole client in Arthur Primm.
-*He was a legal aid for Albion W. Tourgée who was a lawyer from North Carolina, that eventually became a judge. Albion once opined that "Jesus Christ was a carpetbagger." Desmond became a lawyer for the railroad ‘robber barons' shortly thereafter. He made most of his money before meeting Arthur this way.
+*He was a legal aid in the Reconstruction for Albion W. Tourgée who was a lawyer from North Carolina, that eventually became a judge. Albion once opined that "Jesus Christ was a carpetbagger." He spent most his time with clients like Albion, or with railroad barons throughout the south.
 *Proper is a Neonate Ventrue, but despite his generation he has lived for quite some time...probably older year-wise than most Neonates.
 *Shareholder and operator of the Brandtwynne Hotel located in beautiful downtown Pittsburgh.

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 {{Sidebar_PC_Masquerade
 |name=Desmond Proper, Esq.
-|image=PrimmImage.png
+|image=Proper.jpg
 | pronouns= He/Him
 |clan=Ventrue

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 {{Sidebar_PC_Masquerade
-|name=Arthur Primm
+|name=Desmond Proper, Esq.
 |image=PrimmImage.png
 | pronouns= He/Him
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-<div style='background-color:#b17304; border:solid 2px #000; padding: 10px 10px 10px 10px; font-family:Arial; color: #010203; box-shadow: 3px 3px 5px 2px;">
+<div style='background-color:#808080; border:solid 2px #000; padding: 10px 10px 10px 10px; font-family:Arial; color: #010203; box-shadow: 3px 3px 5px 2px;">
-=== Council Position: Primogen of Production and Distribution ===
+=== CFO of the Primm and Proper Hospitality Group LLC ===
-'''Praetor of Clan Ventrue'''
+'''Questor of Clan Ventrue'''
 === About ===
-*Wealthy hotel magnate. The Primm & Proper Hospitality Group is known throughout the east coast and is invested in a chain of hotels and convention centers in the region.
+*Silent partner and partial owner of Primm & Proper Hospitality Group LLC. The Primm & Proper Hospitality Group is known throughout the east coast and is invested in a chain of hotels and convention centers in the region.
-*Primm has been involved in rebuilding Pittsburgh since the Great Depression, and he and Prince Lyn have been heavily working to make sure that the town keeps above water.
+*He was a legal aid for Albion W. Tourgée who was a lawyer from North Carolina, that eventually became a judge. Albion once opined that "Jesus Christ was a carpetbagger." Desmond became a lawyer for the railroad ‘robber barons' shortly thereafter.
-*Primm is an elder Ventrue, but seems polite to most younger Kindred. Maybe it’s his hospitable nature, or maybe his partner Desmond Proper keeps him in check.
+*Proper is a Neonate Ventrue, but despite his generation he has lived for quite some time...probably older year-wise than most Neonates.
-*Owner and operator of one of the Brandtwynne Hotel located in beautiful downtown Pittsburgh.
+*Shareholder and operator of the Brandtwynne Hotel located in beautiful downtown Pittsburgh.
 === Public Timeline ===
-*Was a banker in the early 1800s in Philadelphia
+*Was a laywer throughout most the 1800s in the south, worked largely for the railroads.
 *Was a carpetbagger in the late 1800s after the Civil War.
-*Met his silent partner, Desmond Proper, during the Reconstruction.
+*Met his financial partner, Arthur Primm, during the Reconstruction.
 *Moved to Pittsburgh after the Great Depression in the 1930s.
 === Ties Wanted ===
 *Allies for a coterie he is forming, the Board of Directors for “Primm & Proper Hospitality Group LLC”
-*Enemies, Primm is older and tied to traditional ways. He is still polite, but a bit backhanded to others of younger blood.
+*Allies amongst the enemies of Arthur Primm. Proper as his own agenda, and it sometimes conflicts with what Arthur wants to do.
-*Kindred that like playing board games.
+*New clients for his law firm.
 === Rumors ===
 *Primm & Proper are the same person, even though they have been seen together at the same time.
-*His Hospitality Group has been to war with the Family Man over territory in the past, although there has been an uneasy truce since the Family Man has gone to ground.
+*That Desmond Proper has been looking to move on from the P&P Hospitality Group, but just needs the right venture to leave.
-*Arthur and Mother Karina have had a sordid love affair in the past that ended badly.
+*The Hospitality Group has been to war with the Family Man over territory in the past, although there has been an uneasy truce since the Family Man has gone to ground.
 *Feel free to add more here!